Review: The Will by Kristen Ashley

Review: The Will by Kristen AshleyPublished on April 8, 2014
Published by Self Published
Source: Self-Purchase

Early in her life, Josephine Malone learned the hard way that there was only one person she could love and trust: her grandmother, Lydia Malone. Out of necessity, unconsciously and very successfully, Josephine donned a disguise to keep all others at bay. She led a globetrotting lifestyle on the fringes of the fashion and music elite, but she kept herself distant.

While Josephine was trotting the globe, retired boxer Jake Spear was living in the same small town as Lydia. There was nothing disguised about Jake. Including the fact he made a habit of making very bad decisions about who to give his love.

But for Josephine and Jake, there was one person who adored them. One person who knew how to lead them to happiness. And one person who was intent on doing it.

Even if she had to do it as her final wish on this earth.

Hmmmm. Looks like I’m going to live up to my Straight Shootin’ name today.  It is with great…sadness that I write this review.  I’m in the minority on this one and I’m still quite discombobulated about it.  I finished this book on Thursday night and I was unable to pick up another book to read until Friday afternoon…something in me just broke.  Gird your loins, kids…it’s about to get rough up in here.

See, I was super excited about this book.  ARC reviews started coming in and everyone was giving it 5 and 6 stars, saying it was the best book KA has written.  I thought…”great!  something to look forward to!  A new series to get excited about!”.  I started it on Tuesday morning and by that afternoon, I was struggling.  I was struggling with Josephine.  Now, I’ve struggled mightily with KA heroines… Jet…was not a favorite.  But I got through that one.  I could not deal with Josie and her manner of speaking.  Sometimes, it totally took me out of the story…words like “prevaricate”, “alas”, “sally forth” and if she said that one of the children or Jake was “lovely” one more time, I thought my brain was going to explode.  I felt so out of whack, reading an author that I loved and having such an opposite reaction to what I’m used to having.

*Deep breath*

My bar for Kristen Ashley books is exceptionally high.  Games of the Heart and Broken Dove are probably my favorite books written by ANYONE.  I love(d) Dusty…she was REAL and I identified with Dusty.  Unfortunately, I could not connect with Josephine, she did not feel real to me.  Who talks like that?  Now….I am aware that what feels odd to me may not be an issue for anyone else and that’s the beauty of books.  Everyone connects in their own way.

As for Jake… I liked him well enough.  He felt familiar to me, maybe a little bit like Max but not as fabulous as Max.    And familiar is OK!  KA books are my comfort books because she has written H/hs with depth and character that I admire and adore.  I LOVE KA alphas and I love her ability to give details, like hair, shoes, clothing, and homes that completely envelop me in the story.

The sexy times were SUPA DUPA hot!  The first time Jake and Josie get down to tha business…holy moly!  It was so freaking hot…all of the sexy times were.

Kristen Ashley can write the Hell out of an epilogue and this one, I suppose was no exception but by the time I finally got to it… I didn’t care.  I enjoyed it well enough but I mean, to this day, when I read Games of the Heart, I still cry.  I’ve read that book at least 5 times.  I’ve read reviews where people say that it’s “vintage KA” and as a colleague and I discussed today, we do not agree with that assessment.  I want MORE from Kristen Ashley.  It’s there… I know it is!  I also want to know who is next in this series…. I have every intention of reading whatever is next in the Magdalene series.  I hope it’s…different in some way.  I will also be first in line for Frankie and Benny’s book and whatever else comes next.

So, if you’re a KA fan… by all means READ THE BOOK!  You may LOVE  Josephine, that’s the great things about opinions and assholes, everybody has one.  I felt like I’d be remiss and not living up to the reasons I started this blog if I wasn’t completely honest.  I may have just dug my own grave but… oh well.

2.75 stars.  My rating scale for 2 stars is that I struggled with it and I did.  3- I enjoyed it and would read more by this author.  Which is true,  I don’t know that I “enjoyed” it.  I did keep reading because it was KA and I had hope for the character and there were other plot lines I enjoyed.



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About Kristen Ashley

Kristen Ashley was born in Gary, Indiana, USA. She nearly killed her mother and herself making it into the world, seeing as she had the umbilical cord wrapped around her neck (already attempting to accessorise and she hadn’t taken her first breath!).

Kristen grew up in Brownsburg, Indiana but has lived in Denver, Colorado and the West Country of England. Thus she has been blessed to have friends and family around the globe. Her posse is loopy (to say the least) but loopy is good when you want to write.

Kristen was raised in a house with a large and multi-generational family. They lived on a very small farm in a small town in the heartland and existed amongst the strains of Glenn Miller, The Everly Brothers, REO Speedwagon and Whitesnake (and the wardrobes that matched).

Needless to say, growing up in a house full of music, clothes and love was a good way to grow up.

And as she keeps growing up, it keeps getting better

  • Hope

    I agree with you. Although, I liked Josie and the way she talked mostly, though because she was different from all the other KA heroines. I did like this book…3 stars, for me!…but I think I was missing maybe some drama, action? I don’t really know. I didn’t like that they were 45ish…Josie seemed a bit immature for 45, especially since she talked like a 1920’s old lady lol. I didn’t enjoy Amber and Connor as much as her other teens, I really liked Boy Taylor and I liked Ethan. I thought the first half of the book was really good, but the last half lost me. And that first sex! HOLY!!! I was in need of a cigarette after that one!

    Also, KA has done this before but it really bothers me. When I feel the hero is at fault for something, and the heroine does too (seeing as she reacts to it and fights with him about it) I don’t think the heroine should give in so easily. My example in this story was toward the end when Jake would not tell Josie why he read her letters. She was mad and left, but gave in so easily because one person (the omelette guy) said it was ok and [insert reason] might be the reason? And then she forgives and it is ok he is not sharing. That bothers me and KA does it a lot in her books. Her heroines are WAY too forgiving. And there is my mini rant for the day.